Self Assessment
Frankly, I have got nothing to comment about my poem. Because I don’t see any mistakes in organizations, since the poem is too short, and doesn’t seem to need much grammar and ending punctuations. Also, I don’t see any spelling mistake, and I don’t see any sentence that doesn’t seem to fit on the topic of my poem.
But there is a problem. This is the only problem I see in this poem. I am not saying that this word doesn’t fit in the context, but I think there are many better words that can be put instead of using “vomiting,” or I think I should explain more about the word specifically, which is almost impossible in this poem. I think I should try to work on that word.
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